Of course you are the best person who can judge whether a change in the content (as suggested by others above, or otherwise) would probably make a difference or not.I made these for the people who stay. [...] All this opens the door to more possibilities than the old missals alone. But the people who stay in the parish don't care to use them, so those doors stay closed. The people at the parish, the choir etc. the people who could get the most use out of them, usually do not even try them out.
In this case you still have the suggetions about type-setting improvements, like using slashed V + slashed R for celebrant vs. people and (maybe) normal black vs. enhanced, like boldface, for the difference between silent and audible voice instead of red for instructions/explanaions ('rubrics'). Those are certainly low-hanging fruits.When I welcomed feedback, I thought maybe there would be some suggestions for small adjustments here and there, and I really hoped there would be at least a handful of people who were enthusiastic or excited about it as-is (not re-invented.)
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