By the way, many thanks to Fr. Krisman, Mark Thompson, and Adam Wood for their extensive comments and careful reading. Sometimes one feels like a hymn echo chamber, and/or only hears very general feedback. It's very enjoyable to have a chance to discuss the details of my work, and I appreciate your time and effort.
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