Veni de Libano -- for feast of St Therese of Lisieux
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Constructive comments sought. This is a new piece I'm in the process of writing, to go with Circumduxit eam, hereabouts somewhere.
So far, I've got the antiphon itself, but I'm not happy with the last part of the ending I've written so far, which would lead into the verse "Laudate pueri Dominum".
Veni de Libano.pdf140K -
https://forum.musicasacra.com/forum/discussion/9798/two-new-compositions/p1
is supposed to work and have the Circumduxit eam. If anyone can fix the link (or show me what I've failed to do) I'll be grateful. -
This is really nice, Chris.
I am especially attracted by the excitement of your rhythmic complexity.
You should compose the remaing propers for St Therese.
P.S. - your link doesn't seem to work for me. -
Try this link:
https://forum.musicasacra.com/forum/discussion/9798/two-new-compositions/p1
For some reason, the previous link Chris gave points to:https://forum.musicasacra.com/forum/discussion/18675/veni-de-libano-for-feast-of-st-therese-of-lisieux#Item_3
i.e., back to this thread and hence fails.
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Ignorant computer-related question:
How can a link say "Go there", and then not do so? -
How can a link say "Go there", and then not do so?
The url needs to go inside the double quotes - " - within the <a> tag.
e.g. <a href="url goes here">any text here</a>
Pasting a link, highlighting it and clicking the Url button will give you
<a href="">url here</a>
With nothing between the double quotes, it automatically just links to the page you're already on. -
Updated score. Veni de Libano.pdf217K
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Beautiful writing CGZ! Excellent counterpoint. Bravo.
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Does the obvious need to be said, somewhere on the score itself, that after singing "Amen", the piece begins again and goes to the double bar after "cor meum" ?
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I don't know about the repeats, but you have an obvious gift for composition.
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Probably a good idea. There are plenty of people, even Catholics, that would simply end with the Amen. Also, I think there are some punctuation issues (essentially no punctuation), as well as a hyphen before the Amen in the bottom part.
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Jackson,
About rhythmic complexity, I chose 6/8 on purpose to allow the 2-groups-of-three against 3-groups -of-2 to form more or less naturally, representing a certain fluttering of the heart, a wounding of sorts.Thanked by 1M. Jackson Osborn
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