The text is from the opening prayers of the Divine Liturgy (well, sort of...they're the standard prayers for any non-Divine Liturgy service). Six-part, SSATTB. Please attack and comment at will. Feel free to PM me if you like.
Good writing, thanks for posting it. In the recording, since the low voices are inaudible most of the time, you don't hear the occasional issue with things like 6-4 chords, close dissonance between low and high voice. If you want feedback, I'd go through and find those places -- not that many -- where there are parallel octaves, fifths in the bass, and non-harmonic tones that aren't heard. Mostly easy fixes, and might make the work incrementally better. Just one example, bar 2, from "-ry" to "to" can be improved.
Thanks for all the feedback! I did try to clean up the score of the items you suggested; usually it's passing dissonance at the 9th that sounds strangest if there's not a speedy resolution.
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