I don't like the Kyrie much (see Andre Gedalge, "Treatise on the Fugue" for why), but the rest looks very good. While I can't believe you intended the notation you used in the Sanctus (the lines implying a portamento or glissando -- perhaps they are just bad slurs?), the effect would be quite interesting, I think.
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