2 suggestions, if I may: 1) Provide another version up a whole step; 2) Maybe do the top part (which seems more of a tenor part at times) in a treble clef?
Yea i thought about five different arrangements right off the top of my noggin. But I thought I should let you all dictate what would be useable to your specific situation. Which one do you need?
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