One thing I can think of right away is to remember not to simply think vertically but also horizontally. It's easy to come up with some lovely harmonies but then you sing through the alto or tenor part and realize they have a very boring part or an awkward interval which can be rendered much more interesting and singable by perhaps shifting the voicing.
the tenors scraping the empyrean heavens the entire time
in addition to Jeffrey's comments, I would suggest that your hymn also be prayerful. I've found this to be a particular trait of the hymns of Faber, Caswall, Procter, Newman, Donnelly and many others whose hymns were first published as text only and then composers would set them to melodies. Today I think hymn writers compose their words with a particular melody in mind a luxury early hymn writers did not have.does the poem sing with its own music?
I wouldn't bother with Fux in 2020 - due to the lack of published Renaissance works in his lifetime, the method was only able to loosely approximate the Renaissance style.
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