The stone and soldiers kept their watch in vain,
And Christ, once raised, shall never die again.
All praise and honor to the Lamb once slain.
Alleluia!
that's overanalysis in my opinion. A hymn is not a doctrinal treatise, but a work of linguistic art, with a certain amount of artistic license. Thomas Aquinas certainly knew the difference -- that's why he wrote in both forms, I suppose.
For the record, having "Easter Alleluias" in a verse with an Alleluia refrain doesn't bother me a bit.
WRT the final verse, the eschaton is always on the mind of the Church, right? Certainly an expression of longing for the completion of redemption, so to speak, is not out of place in an Easter hymn.
And considering Jesus said "even the stones would cry out," is it such a stretch to think this one kept watch (presumably in silence)?
The vs. 1 first line refers to the line in the exultet: Let this place resound wth joy/ echoing the mighty song of all God's people (which is alleluia)
Forgotten verse: yes, I mean to say that the stone"kept watch," in its way. That line is an homage to Wesley's inimitable "Vain the stone, the watch, the seal"
last verse: I'm always as eschatological as possible.
Btw, a fellow saw this text on my blog and suggested I send it to his protestant hymnal committee. Does anyone have any thougts about whether Catholics should be writing hymns for Protestants?
Well, not really. Write hymns according to the Catholic faith, as you already do, and if non-Catholics would like to sing them as well, that's fine. Protestant hymnals have been borrowing Catholic hymn texts (directly or translated) for a long time.
Can you put a clause in the contract to require higher royalty payments if they play guitar or piano instead of the organ? :-)
I really like Engelberg, and except for the great All Praise to Thee, for Thou, O King Divine (by F. Bland Tucker, Jeffrey's great-great-great-uncle?) it's hard to find a useful text for it.
There has been newer texts that COULD fit "Engelberg" metrically (10 10 10 w/alleluia). However, publishers seem to prefer to kill another great tune - "Sine Nomine" instead. I'd much rather save "Sine Nomine" for its rightful text (For All the Saints).
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