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  • This is nice, indeed.
    Your performance would profit from a greater flow and nuance from word accent to word accent.
    It should flow roughly as speech flows.
  • CCoozeCCooze
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    I'm going to assume you want feedback with this as well, and so will type things as I hear them in the video.

    1) If you are expecting "peace" to be held, you should either replace the vertical- with a horizontal episema, or you could change it to a bistropha.

    ...oh, drat. When I came back to my computer, the video had already been removed. I'll leave you with that bit on "peace," then..