Here is another paraphrased version of Psalm 23 which I composed back in the early 90's. You are free to utilize this during your liturgies as long as you keep the copyright in tact.

Kathy... perhaps you would like to collaborate on setting new hymn musics to some of your wonderful texts. Let me know.

You can listen to an mp3 file here:

http://romancatholicsacredmusic.com/seehear/psalm23.mp3

Francis