I like this! I was a follower of the devotion to Mary, Undoer of Knots for many years before I even heard of Pope Francis. It isn't a new devotion, but is definitely powerful. Did you suggest music for this hymn, or did I miss that?

I understand the wittiness of using the word "spell," but it's not really appropriate for hymns. People susceptible to getting sucked into occult practices and thinking are always looking for justifications, and people who want to mock the Church do much the same. Also, there have been accusations in the past that the Untier devotion is used as "magic" by some, so you really wouldn't want to provide food for such accusations.

I like it a lot in every other respect. Good stuff!

Also, there have been accusations in the past that the Untier devotion is used as "magic" by some

Abusus non tollit usum.

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By the way, most of those hyphens aren't really required; the program will insert them automatically if they are needed. But if you prefer to have them af-ter ev-ery syl-la-ble break, then you can add them expressly as JMO recommends in the video.